Very minimal...it tells a story, it makes the viewer wonder what is going on here, which is a good thing. However, I think it may be too minimal, it had my attention for a few seconds and then lost it. But very good idea and a pretty good execution here too as well. Nice work.
Artistic. However, putting it in the middle left of a vertical frame may have been too much. Like Paul, I lost the subject after a second. You did great on the technical side though and I can only commend that part.